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Sunday, November 4th 2007

9:12 PM

A week of birthdays

Veronica Joyce

 

  Born 30th October 1927 and still going strong!

We arrived in Venice at 4.30 p.m. on the Saturday before and it was a mad rush to get to Mum’s and then ready to go out to the restaurant where a group of friends and family had been invited for the main celebration. My brother, his wife, two of their sons, my son, my sister, Mum’s cousin, various Italian step-family and then loads of friends all sat down to a delicious meal at Da Celeste. I wish I had been feeling more up for it, but I was exhausted. The beginning of the school year has been so hectic and I was totally run-down with mouth abscesses and ulcers. We got to bed at 2 a.m. and I slept like the dead until ten o’clock in the morning. On Tuesday, Mum’s real birthday, we celebrated at the Cipriani Hotel in Asolo (just family) and, by then, I was feeling more like my old self. My mother is one popular lady and the phone did not stop ringing all day.

The rest of the week was for R & R and marking GCSE English coursework (in easy stages so it wasn’t too onerous). We had some meals out with friends or stayed in by the fire (it was cold) and watched DVDs (The Painted Veil, Miss Potter, The Last King of Scotland, Amazing Grace). Here is the view from Mum’s at sunset. Isn’t it lush?


We got back last night and, joy of joy, my RNA reader’s report was waiting for me and it was very positive. Of course there was advice on things that don’t work, notably my use of very short sentences which break the flow of the story. I knew something was wrong, but I couldn’t quite put my finger on it. Now I’ve started running them together the pace is much smoother. The report concludes with the following:

“All in all it is an interesting story and I enjoyed reading it. Your writing skills are obvious and with a few changes this is a publishable book. ...The plot is unusual and I would have thought very saleable. Try and finish it sooner rather than later and I wish you every success with it.”

If only there were more hours in a day! I’m feeling much more motivated now to get on with it, but family and the day job have to come first. Talking of which, today is my dear husband’s birthday. Next one will be the big six oh and we’ll celebrate in style. This one we kept low key with lunch out at a pub and a cake and candles at home for tea.


Happy Birthday Victor!

 

30 total comments.

Posted by Dru:

Sounds like you had a good visit in Italy.

I'm so glad that you finally got your reader report from RNA and that it was very positive. It sounds like you are going in the right direction.

Happy Birthday to your hubby.

Have a good week.
Sunday, November 4th 2007 @ 11:08 PM

Posted by Bailey Stewart:

Happy Birthday to your hubby and mother.

The RNA report sounds really great - it certainly would motivate me to get going.
Monday, November 5th 2007 @ 12:18 AM

Posted by Brandy:

it does sound as though you had a good time, and relaxed! YAY! I hope your Mom had a fantastic birthday! Congratulations on the report from RNA. It sounds as though they enjoyed your story! WTG!

And HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO SIOBHANS HUBBY! *g*
Monday, November 5th 2007 @ 4:48 AM

Posted by Shirley:

Happy birthday to your hubby, and a belated happy birthday to your mum. What a fabulous picture of her too!

I'm so pleased you finally got that RNA report back, and even more pleased it was so positive. Well done! Get cracking then... :o)
Monday, November 5th 2007 @ 12:41 PM

Posted by MariK:

Your mother looks so pretty in her picture! Very young looking. Her cake looks so good! Congrats on your great reviews regarding your book! I hope to read it when it is published! Maybe I can get an autographed copy. he he. Happy Birthday to your husband as well! November is a great month of birthdays. My dads birthday is this month as well as my daughter Grace. Scratch Charlie and Sophie behind the ears for me...
Tuesday, November 6th 2007 @ 10:26 AM

Posted by Alison:

Hi Siobhan, glad you had a good trip. can't get over the family ressemblance between you and your Mum! Clearly a very elegant lady.
Saturday, November 10th 2007 @ 8:01 PM

Posted by Devon Ellington:

There's nothing wrong with making the choice that the family and your day job come before the writing. In fact, kudos to you for making it a CHOICE and accepting the responsibility for it -- that your writing career will have a different trajectory and a different shape than someone who puts the writing first.

I'm delighted you got such a good report, and hapy belated b.d. to your mother!
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